"Sorry, but your circuit seems to only have a limited resemblance to the plan for the 2.4 version."
Most likely, this guessing game could go on 10 or 20 times longer – and this forum isn't intended for that.
Try to develop a certain "active understanding" of such circuits, and you will most likely find the errors yourself.
And please do not ask any further questions on the private email channel .
- I don't have enough time for that.